The light ruffling breeze of the night
turned chilly
and unbearable at last
slowly permeating inside
the numb mind and the icy heart
triggering a painful coldness
that no blankets or medications
could warm
Caused by the nature almighty,
the coldness waits to be taken away
and transformed into a peaceful warmth
by the same nature
very tender, beautiful and touching padmini.
Thank you so much, Sharmishtha:) appreciate your comment
hope..and hope…
yes, there is always hope that the darkness would see light..Thank you, Soumya
Beautiful.
Hi Charlie, Thank you very much..
You’re welcome.:)
I assume you are referring to two types of warmth to cure two types of cold.Nicely deviised.
well, thank you, Ken
A night of reflection, a sad emotion..intriguing poem, as always superbly crafted..
yes, coldness not only in the outer surface, but also the inner self..Thank you for the kind comment.
Yeah so true…nature itself heals what it inflicts to us…
Ohh thanks you’ve just given me an idea for a new post.
oh..thank you for the comment.. nice to know that this post inspires…
I love your free form style and meaningful poetic style!
That’s very kind of you to say..and thanks a lot