Cherie looked at the old photo of college students, decorating her wall. He was the one on the corner. He had refused what she had asked and was now a flower vase in her showcase. Each vase symbolized the mood, color and character of the person, thus keeping them alive forever. Her collection had kept growing and she intended to add more.
“Cherie, did you dust the mantelpiece?” her madam called out.
“I will do it right away, madam,” replied Cherie, rushing over to the living room.
Madam had her collection of bouquets too. The ones that never withered.
This week’s flash fiction challenge is to write a story about “the old photograph.” What is captivating about it? Where did it come from? How does it incite a story? Thank you, Charli, for the opportunity.
Oh! That’s a very intriguing story indeed!
Thank you, Shweta:)
You’re very welcome 🙂
Both women are intriguing for their collecting and preserving.
I love the depth of this one. So many stories untold. How are they collecting these precious things? Keeping them alive..? I picture magic, but of that, there are many kinds also. Clever take on the prompt, this one pulled me right in.
They are no normal women and their magic is open to interpretation:) I am glad that you liked this story and found it interesting. Thank you so much for commenting.
That was an interesting story and a creative take on the prompt.
Thank you so much, Charli
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Scary! Loved it much. Very different and unique indeed. Carry on with this great writing spree.
Thank you:) It was different for me as well as I don’t usually write in this genre. Glad you liked this and thank you kindly for commenting.
It was my pleasure. Really enjoyed it.
Oh i got this eerie feeling reading your story, meticulously penned. What’s so wonderful is that you are able to incite that uncanny element in such few lines. Beautifully thought dear👍👌😊
Thank you so much, Samreen. As I don’t usually write in this genre, I wondered if the narrative would work..I am relieved to see your comments. So happy you liked it😊
I so did dear🤗😊💖
Wow, nightlake. Love this story. I just caught it this evening, but it is excellent. A good story, a good use of the prompt, and surprising, too. ~nan
Thank you so much, Nancy:)