
I tried to move my ravaged limbs
when I heard arms and legs
thrashing around
in the next ward.
I rasped, trying to breathe
as incoherent screams
from the neighborhood
gave voice to my pain.
Silence found me, at last,
and I was wrapped, but
my soul wandered,
half-desolate and half-ecstatic.
Then I opened
my new eyes
to see a vague form
as motherly cooing
caressed my ears.
Unique write. NICE!
Thank you so much, Amy. Guess it might be a little morbid, but I was just experimenting with a different topic from my usual ones. Wish you a nice weekend:) xo
So beautifully written!
xoxoxo
Thank you, Carolyn. It has been a long time. How are you doing?
Very well, Thank You. Life continues to unfold with many surprises!
And you?
Doing good too:) You were performing ballet earlier, right? Still into it?
Oh, I wish! No, I wasn’t performing ballet, I was just doing some ballet type exercises. Not so much now though! K and I are getting back to our ballroom dancing. We’re off to a social dance tomorrow eve – only our third in the past year. We do love it. Hopefully, next year when all the craziness (covid-19) comes to a close we’ll be able to do a little more. Until then, like everyone, we just have to do whatever comes!
Hopefully, the craziness would go away next year. Happy times to you:)
Oh that is so beautiful and poignant. Loved it so much 💙
one life ends and soul wanders to find a new body, eyes closed forever but again opened to a new beginning. Did I get it right??
Correct, Samreen. That is what I wanted to convey:)
I truly loved the whole idea and how you presented it❤️
Thank you so much, Samreen, for reading this and taking the time to comment 😊
A pleasure always dear😊
I will be over on Saturday night to read your next post:)
I am grateful really, there are actually few people here whose comments I desperately wait, you being one of them, a constant support of encouragement. Thank you so much🤗💕
I really enjoy coming over to your blog as the pictures and poems are a treat. Also, the yummy food recipes 😊
Am obliged really, thank you so much🙂 And as I do enjoy yours 💖
No obligations, please😊 It is a lovely blog indeed. And you are also being kind to many fellow bloggers.
That’s so sweet of you dear, I will do remember your name, 😊
Beautiful 💕
Thank you so much for the like and the kind comment:)
It was my utmost pleasure 🤗
God bless you 💖
Touching
Thank you so much:)