Friday Fictioneers – The Crown Prince

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“This is our gift to the crown prince.” the sage told the king, beckoning to the men who carried three boxes. The king signalled to the prince to open the red box. It revealed a beautiful woman with reddish blond hair and gentle blue eyes. The prince’s eyes shone as he walked over to the blue one. It opened to a svelte Eastern beauty with raven hair and wild dark eyes.

The smitten prince strolled to the white box, his eyes shining with greed. Upon finding the box empty, he went inside. He was calm when he emerged two minutes later. He removed his crown and handed them to his father, “I renounce everything.” he said as he walked barefoot to the forest.

This was written for Rochelle’s Friday Fictioneers. Thanks to Rich Voza for the photo.

46 thoughts on “Friday Fictioneers – The Crown Prince

  1. Oh man, I want to know what’s in he white box. The first two were awesome. I might’ve stopped there. But whatever is in the white is obviously life-changing. I like the way you leave this to the imagination. Well done!

  2. I like that. Could it be that the Prince found the beauty of the forest? He wanted nothing more than to spend his time with the trees and the birds?

    A wonderful story

    • Possible. Do you think his decision was wrong? Maybe to his parents who wanted to him succeed as a king. But, the sage who brought those gifts had achieved his purpose. Thank you, Dawn:)

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