Dream Song


You listen to my ramblings

with wonder and respect

that no one has accorded me

Your cast down eyes

and faraway look

imply a strange proximity

You see beauty

in my plain countenance

and depth

in my shallow eyes

I marvel at my fortune

and remain obliged

to cupid for choosing me

out of the millions

21 thoughts on “Dream Song

    • so glad that this poem evoked all these feelings in you..I’d say that thankfulness and devotion are the most significant thoughts in the poem followed by sadness and perhaps some insecureness. Thank you, as always, for your thoughtful analysis..

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