The trees welcome you
with different shades of Green,
Grey, Orange and bright Yellow
rivalling flowers to display their beauty
They radiate a unique fragrance
of leaves, adjoining flowers
and the thick roots
Take a deep breath
fill yourself with this enticing fragrance
on your way to the destination,
store it deep in your heart
and hold it secure
till you visit the next time
Flows beautifully with clever use of capitals and limited punctuation. No need for verses in this subtle and enchanting poem.
Thank you so much, Ken, for reading this and your kind comment
A truly lovely poem… really enjoyed it….
Thank you so much:)))
Gorgeous thoughts and feelings…. xoxoxo
Hi Carolyn, very glad you enjoyed it and wish you a lovely weekend:)
And to you, too… a lovely weekend… xoxoxo
lovely will be the journey then… 🙂
yes, if you preserve the fragrance, the journey would be lovely:))
Outstanding! Beautifully said.
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Thank you very much, Charlie! sure, will visit the blog!
You’re very welcome.
A truly lovely poem..very, very nice. Bye Orofiorentino from Italy
Thank you so much:)
this is so amazing padmini, i felt like taking a walk in some specific places in full spring.
Thank you so much, Sharmishtha:) so glad you got the picture
you painted it very beautifully 🙂
I want to visit next time….:)
sure:) and thank you for the comment
Thanks a lot:)