When you sang
I lost my heart
When you spoke
I lost my voice
When you painted
I lost my imagination
When you looked
I stood mesmerized
Now I am deprived of my senses
as you go searching
for your next victim
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When you sang
I lost my heart
When you spoke
I lost my voice
When you painted
I lost my imagination
When you looked
I stood mesmerized
Now I am deprived of my senses
as you go searching
for your next victim
Oh wow…this is pretty intense… wonderfully written and I hope healing for you!!! Sending Love ~
Thanks a lot, Robyn. This is not my personal feelings or emotions:) I just wrote from the point of view of a cheated lover:) However, glad that you enjoyed it:)
ahhh- well I did get the emotional burst – so shows how good a poet you are!!! Happy not your own saga though 🙂
Thank you for the appreciation. Sometimes I write from a Horse’s or a Deer’s point of view also..Lol:)
yes – I have done this with ducks and puppy !! Very fun – and effective I believe;)
That’s right:)